PoeticXscape

Excellent. I like the way you drew me into your view, your observations of life, focusing on the many who have no purpose or goals. Your descriptions painted visual pictures ...

This is filled with some great imagery, but mostly I like the rhythm and how you didn't shy from using strong fitting rhymes that make the poem pound like a ...

I'm afraid I do not know which poem this is based on but I enjoyed it none the less. It had great descriptive wordings that helped carry the rhythm along. ...