Plushoriam

Wow! It will be awfully hard to critique that. Extremely well-written, great descriptions and personalities. That plushoriam world has me confused a bit, but that's good. Reminds me a little ...

Hopefully this will be third time lucky. As this is the opening chapter, yh, some aspects will seem a LOT like Poke/Digi. But as more chapters are posted, you will ...

Hey guys! Thanks for critiquing. I know you mean well but I couldn't help feeling a little knocked down. But I'm alright now, they're all valid points and suggestions, and ...