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also the pumpkin gut thing wasnt in it as far as I'm aware, and the other grammar error you mentioned isnt in the original doc so my theory is the ...

i love this, but maybe remove the "pray to your god" part because as an Athiest child this feels uninclusive, and I know it said "Your God" for inclusivity but ...

thank you for your review, I wanted to clarify the grammar errors are a result of this being written by a team of middle schoolers on a doc so that's ...

This is AMAZING! Like, Holy 🍮 bro you cooked. I've always liked Zombie stories but this is just, (imagine a random blondie doing a chef's kiss) masterpiece. Also I can't ...

That... is long. I'm sorry I couldn't read it all but from what I DID read it was really good.