Pippiedooda

I'm liking the fairytale writing- there's something about that style that always makes me smile :) I think this is a good start- I hope you write more! Anyway, on ...

Hi! I thought this was a well written prologue- a good way of introducing the story :D I'd definitely be interested in reading more if you post it! Live life ...

Hi :) This was a really interesting story- amazingly written too! :D Very disturbing, but in a way that makes you want to read on. I really enjoyed reading it! ...

Hi :) good beginning! I like how you've added in the flashback, it really adds to the mystery around the main character. I like how you've ended this part too- ...

Hi :) I really liked this part- I think even more than the last. I like the mysteriousness surrounding Thor- it really adds to the suspense of the story and ...

Hi :) , this is a very powerful storyline- I think you have managed it quite well. I read the prologue as well and I thought that was a good ...

Hi there :) I like this story so far- I think you've got a really good beginning here! Firstly I think you should break up the beginning paragraph. I'd put ...

Hi :) I found the beginning to your story very interesting and generally well written, here's a few comments on possible improvement: He knew something unusual, no, extraordinary was about ...

Me again :D I like how you switch between the past and present, this was very well written too- I love how he's taken on his friends speech although I ...

Hi :) This was a brilliant story- I loved it. It was very involving and well written, great piece of work! :D On with the review: she just closed her ...

I don't know why no-one has reviewed this yet- its really good! I loved the style of writing you used and the twist at the ending was great- I'm going ...

Hi me again :) I like this part too, I really enjoy the humorous twist you put on things. Here are a few comments on possible improvement: As the Police ...

This is a really beautiful caption of a moment, I found it very moving and brilliantly written- well done :) I couldn't find much that could be improved but I ...

Nice cliffhanger ending! (Except for its quite annoying as I want to know what happens :P) I think this is pretty well written and doesn't really need much editing, I ...

I really enjoyed this piece, I thought it was a great opening to a story and very well written- especially for someone who has just been plowing through and not ...