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Piperh19

  • Poetry » General, General Re: 2 pm

    Good morning, Fortis! I'm finally here to review! This is a very nice poem with great imagery. You make a great opening with your first sentence, showing and not telling ...

    Dec 27, 2016


Remember: the plot is nothing more than footprints left in the snow after your characters have run by on their way to incredible destinations.
— Ray Bradbury