Piper

Yes, it is a rough draft. I typed it in an hour and ran it through spell check, and i'm sick. I'll try to put it into paragraphs, but i'm ...

I really hope this is better, because I spent an hour editing this and chapter 1

OK. I hope this is better

Just to let you know, a "parody" doesn't have be exact. " Fairest" by Gail Carson Lavign (if that's how you spell it) had was snow white, and she had ...

Ok, I thought a parody was, like, weird al or epic movie were they're making fun of it, but of if thats the defintion, ok. I was'nt offended, I like ...

Ok, have you read the prologe? if you had you would know that "Hazel" is acctually a princess (rapunzel), the witch is lying to her, she wants her to think ...

lol.THAT was funny

Thats really cool. We've been told our whole lives were going to use math, and you just showed that in a cool way. Keep Writing!

Ok, I liked it, but it's really short, more like a paragraph that a chapter. Also, the character telling the story's name is never said. Also, What are they running ...

Thanks for the reviews! Ok carbonCore- I know what your saying, and I know I suck at spelling. I tried to read My Immortal, and the spelling alone was so ...

Hi, you told me to comment, so I did. Ummmmmm.....Some of your word choice made little sense but other than hat, it was great!