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Re: A note and a ring
I agree with MG on this. Though in saying that, it IS your writing style and it is different. It's almost as if it is your characters mind writing the ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: Triple Point - Segment 1
Atmospheric. Descriptive though only enough to let the readers imagination play with it. I'm terrible at these reviews so I'll just say "Well Done". Enjoyed it greatly. The last sentance ...
Jun 26, 2008 -
Re: The City that Forever Sleeps
I quite like it. Though I was wondering why the government would set a disease on its own people. Maybe if you added a conspiracy theory to it, like WHY ...
Jun 26, 2008 -
Re: A quest for the heir of the phoenix ~ chapter one - part a
Well, I officially love the character Lylle. Seems to me like a very virile and self sufficient gal. Maybe angry? Her persuasion of Sanson was quite amusing, I'd love to ...
Jun 26, 2008