Pigeon

Hecatia!!!!!!!!!! You posted!!!!!!!! This is funny! ^_^ There's just a couple of things I'm not sure about: Once upon a time there was a woodcutter who had four sons. Why ...

Hi there, pigeon here to review. :) This is cute, I really like it. Your writing style is very smooth and consistent and your descriptions are lovely. A pungent aroma ...

Anger. It is something of an enigma. Why is there such an emotion? Is anger vital to our evolution? Anger might have been a mutation that is non-beneficial to us. ...

I really like this! Especially the ending! I think your ideas are really good and the story line is interesting and a good length. My only real criticism is that ...

Here to review as requested :) Corrections and notes are in red. Octavius. It%u2019s streets were broad and well lit. It%u2019s houses all looked alike. The shops had no difference ...

Hi there! Pigeon here to review! Firstly I want to say: I really like this, and I think it has a lot of potential. Because of that, I'm going to ...

I really like this, it's cute :) There's not really anything wrong with your grammar, and you have a very consistent writing style which is good. I have a couple ...

Hey there Karzkin :) This is my disclaimer saying that even though I'm going to be mean and pedantic, I do like this poem. It has so much atmosphere, I ...

Hi there! I thought this was a really lovely song, and I like the garden theme. You could maybe do even more with that, like talking about how the tree ...

Hi there! Pigeon here to review. :) I really like your concept and you write descriptions beautifully. All I'm really going to do is point out your grammatical errors, because ...

This is a great story! Really powerful. I loved it. The only suggestions I have are a few places where your phrasing could be clearer. The little girl's dress trailed ...

Audy covered most things, so I just have a couple of thoughts to add. My English teachers are always telling me this: A good short story has one setting and ...

That being said, I want to point out that I do, in fact, know that Every Single Word Is Cap(ed). lol I know, I know. I like it like that, ...

Hi there! Pigeon here to review! :D This is a really lovely piece. The general mood is captured very well and you carry of the rhyming scheme quite nicely. The ...

They say when you love someone, You've got to let them go. If they come back, they're yours, no? The rhyme of 'go' and 'no' feels a little forced. You ...