PiesAreSquared

As requested by your status, very small edits to make a 150 word cut from 1601 words to 1451 words. “Come here, Elizabeth.” The little ginger-haired girl did as asked, ...

Hey Scar, here to review. You know how mean I can be with the reviews sometimes, I'll try to be just as horrible to you, because I believe this will ...

Hey hey Sherri! I'm here to review (duh! Like I would be here to laugh at myself!). At the time of me writing this, it had 0 reviews. I'm not ...

Hai, here to review. I have read the entire piece through, and I think your worst fear has arrived. This grammar Nazi will tear your work apart. I hope you ...

Finally! -Arianna-! Reading his chapter through, i feel like I'm in a filler waiting for the author to have a burst of inspiration. Regret registers on his face for a ...

Oh look! Its Salian! My autocorrects tells me his name is actually Selena. And now! Review! So far, I see nothing, but I glance at Arianna's ship to make sure ...

Hey Prince Judas! Ok, I lost the previous draft of my review, so I’m back at it again. YAY! Alright so first of all what was the point in Aria's ...

Sorry again about the time taken! Let's get right to it! Some general comments first though. Reading this piece made me feel....icky. The plot jumps faster and further than kangaroos. ...

Hey aurora. Sorry for the time I took, life is giving me pains. But, I'll get on with it! After stripping me of my weapons, Salian's lackeys toss me into ...

Hey high top! I'm here for the exchange! First of all might I say, you are a brilliant poetist! This is a really awesome piece of work and I am ...

Hello Hecate, here for the poetry exchange. First of all, I really really (multiply that by a trillion) love the absolute fantasticality of the imagery. Now that’s a cool phrase. ...

Hey Megpies, here for the exchange. I really love your....picturation. That is, the colorful pictures you paint with words. I think at first you should strongly establish the speaker, narrator. ...

Hey Aley! Here for the poetry exchange, admittedly late, but let's get to work. Firs of all, I really like the imagination here, the equating of life to suffering. But. ...

Hey aurora. So at first I was confused and didn't know whose point of view this was, I thought it was the brothers', but you soon cleared that up, seeing ...

Hey Tenyo! I’m here! Alive, no less. Or am I? Anyway, on with the review. I think this fits directly after part six, which means I don’t find a place ...