PickledChrissy

Thanks for the review! Um, yeah that part with Asset and Crystalline. I just noticed that, and it kinda shocked me. That is not supposed to be there. Wrote that ...

I'll try to write more, and will post it if I do. Thanks for reviewing! :D Btw I think its funny that you did it in the wrong text area.

Thank you! No, I meant passed in. The meaning of the phrase becomes clear later on. I will work on the comma problem, and one more problem that you showed ...

Thanks, Martina! Yeah, I will take it out. It doesn't really fit in the story. :D

Thanks Megs! Sorry for taking so long to reply. I never got a notification for your review. I know Asset needs work. I've been trying to work on him, but ...

Thanks Megs! Sorry for taking so long to reply. I never got a notification for your review. I know Asset needs work. I've been trying to work on him, but ...

Thanks, Livy! That was an awesome review! Yeah, Phoenix really went bad. Makes her fun to write about! :D

Thanks, Livy! That was an awesome review! Yeah, Phoenix really went bad. Makes her fun to write about! :D

Thanks, Gravity!

Thanks for the review!

Thanks, kevin!

Thanks, oracle! I'm sure I don't know what kind of idiotic weirdo talks to a computer when he's reviewing. :P

Thanks, zbax! And, actually, you are supposed to put different people talking in different paragraphs. ;) Some random rule probably hidden at the back of my grammar book, that I ...

Yeah, it is. I was sitting there and just decided to try and put my thoughts on paper.

Thanks! I will definitely be working on this chapter.