Photon

First off, I'm going to throw you with a "thumbs up" and a pat on the back. I enjoyed this. Now there are a couple of flaws here and there, ...

Short and sweet. I liked it. You had a couple of personified phrases which caught my eye. (thumbs up) I would have to agree with inkwell on the last two ...

Interesting. I kind of felt this minute shadow of depression, until I finished reading everything. I like it! As stated in previous reviews/comments/replies, the rhymes you toyed with were fluid ...