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Re: Wandering
The beginning of this poem - I'd say the whole thing from 'I wandered' to 'any thought,' - is very well-written and beautiful. It has an intensity to it, the ...
Sep 16, 2013 -
Re: Time
Heyo, a few thoughts that occurred to me; First, 'between the sun and moon' sounds a bit off to me, possibly because of the missing article for moon. The next ...
Sep 16, 2013
