PhoenixEmberly

Hi Stellerjay! I must admit I often have trouble finding typos and grammar errors in writing. This is especially true in long stories, so I heavily appreciate you taking the ...

The imagery in this is absolutely fantastic! I did enjoy reading this, it flowed nicely on my head as well. I really don't have too much to add in terms ...

Yes! The narrator did have the disease, he got it as he was a bystander in the initial outbreak. He was suppressing the memory as a result of denial throughout ...

Hey Brenn, thanks for commenting! This was actually a really old story of mine (I wanna say 2018) that was pretty early on in my writing career, but I wanted ...

Very nice essay. I have never read this book, or even heard of i, but everything in this essay seems pretty solid. You did a good job at pulling examples ...

Hi Mckaylaam, thank you so much for the review. I'm glad to hear you enjoyed this story! I appreciate your notes on a couple things I could polish, as well ...

I'll definitely keep an eye out for punctuation in this story and in future works, thanks for pointing that out to me. I'm very glad you enjoyed this and I ...

I am very glad to hear you enjoyed it! Trust me, there is plenty more on the way.