PhantomInvader

This is very well written, but there are just a couple of things that are bothering me. Honey, amber eyes but they quickly began to darken and harden into black ...

M'kay~! This is really, really well done. I haven't seen something done in this (I guess I should call it a style) for a long time now. Self narrative and ...

Perhaps it's my naivete, but I can't find anything terribly wrong with this piece (well, nothing that I can point out without sounding like a broken record). So I'll tell ...

Wow. Rough draft or not, you've got something good here. I usually don't see poetry about actual pop-culture/people, but then again I'm not much of a poetry buff myself. I ...