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  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Serena, the Colours, and the Death

    Okay, that was a pretty good! So a few tips. 1. Check your grammar properly, you'll find quite a few mistakes in there. 2. Pacing is good, but it's slightly ...

    Oct 21, 2015


“All stories are true," Skarpi said. "But this one really happened, if that's what you mean.”
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