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Re: Serena, the Colours, and the Death
Okay, that was a pretty good! So a few tips. 1. Check your grammar properly, you'll find quite a few mistakes in there. 2. Pacing is good, but it's slightly ...
Oct 21, 2015
Okay, that was a pretty good! So a few tips. 1. Check your grammar properly, you'll find quite a few mistakes in there. 2. Pacing is good, but it's slightly ...
Oct 21, 2015
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