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  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Serena, the Colours, and the Death

    Okay, that was a pretty good! So a few tips. 1. Check your grammar properly, you'll find quite a few mistakes in there. 2. Pacing is good, but it's slightly ...

    Oct 21, 2015


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