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Re: Hallowed Ground | Chapter Two
Happy Monday! As promised, here I am to review the second chapter! To start with, some small things throughout the chapter: Had fled at a fast walk without looking back. ...
Jul 20 -
Re: Hallowed Ground | Chapter One
I originally read this so I can review the second chapter in the Green Room, but I loved it immediately! (Just like Tika said I would) I’ll keep this one ...
Jul 19 -
Re: Red tides
I'll jump right in! I like your format - chaotic - and your eclectic writing style! Using imagery instead of info-dumping is an opening strategy I enjoy! Here are some ...
Jul 6