Pforrest

well, you got my view and review... aren't you glad i clicked it now. p.s i should be doing my homework since i've got soooooooo much of it, but instead ...

Awesome poem! I love how the depth develops in the second stanza, where it becomes more than just a car ride, but a question about man and his creations. I ...

'I want to be where the people are... up where they walk, up they run, up where they stay all day in the-' oh wait, that's from the little mermaid. ...

Hi! I thought the dialogue in the beginning was great. It flowed naturally, and i like how you didn't have to say 'said,' yet i knew who was speaking. (This ...

This is really clever! Aside from the small mistakes here and there (which, I might add, are very rare), you write very well and you seem to have a way ...