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:mrgreen: Thank you! I just started reading, saw some errors, and decided to post on them! After all, you give lots of us(er, the other members, since I haven't posted ...

Hmm, this was also good. I agree with El, Ama’Ali is just a little forced. And when you're describing her, you need to do some showing instead of, well, telling. ...

My cousin just told me about him on Thanksgiving. She told me that he's probably really depressed over Kerry losing the election, and it might take a while until he ...

I know I've read Redwall and Mattemeo all the way through, but only part of about three others.

Well, I'm sure someone's said this before, but maybe you could sit down with a book writen by your favorite author(or just your favorite book) and study the style. Just ...

I can't even write poetry. It might help if I actually tried....

I read a few of them three or two years ago. I think I only finished two, but they were good. I need to pick them up again!

Gosh, that's horrible! 6 units out of 40:?: :!: What'd you guys do the whole year?

Yes, it is good, and does sound like a short history.

Hai!! This was an awesome poem!! It flowed so well(except for the part that Drizzt mentioned). It's almost like a song....

Thank you!!!! :D :D :D I only learnt about run on sentences last week, and havn't edited it since then, so that's why I had so many. Thanks for pointing ...

I know what to do with two of the things you said, IC; Iloeri leaned a little closer, to see outside. You could put 'peering outside' in stead of 'to ...

They were? Ok. That's kind of what I ws thinking happened, but I had to say something just to make sure. What I do is put the code in on ...

Yeah, Crysi! It was great! It really got me interested in your story.