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Re: The Last Goodbye
I was immediately drawn in to this because it is the title of one of my favourite songs. I enjoyed reading it immensely. The words themselves are well chosen and ...
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Re: The Cosmos Dethroned
Well written indeed. Unlike what you think it does not suck. The language you use is original for the most part and descriptive dialogue is really immersive. You make an ...
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Re: The Dark Crystal Part 7
Very strangely written. Random information is kind of inserted into the story at seemingly random points in time. Description is low, you describe Gaud well-ish but not much else was ...
May 11, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 39 Part 1
I really liked the writing style. It isn't exactly unique but it makes for an interesting read either way. I have read since chapter one and I like the character ...
May 11, 2015
