Perikov

Very nice I like it, really draws you in with it's sudden outburst of violence followed by the aftermath of bleak imagery. The description of the battle itself seemed a ...

Wow..this is a really gripping opening, it made me want more. ^^ It was gritty which I like in a fantasy story, especially when Shaitha was being whipped...that moment was ...

I really liked the introduction to this story...the perspective from the villagers adds a certain anticaption for the reader, and touches of detail within the crowd itself made it more ...