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Penhaligon29

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Wolf Kindred :: The Rising

    Many have pointed out before me about your punctuation and grammar, just look back. I'm sure if you reread what you wrote you would see where to put semi-colons and ...

    Sep 23, 2007
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Prequel.

    Oh...Wow... That was wonderful! Your descriptions were so breathtaking that I want to learn more about the island and what goes on. You made it all seem very real. If ...

    Sep 21, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A Changeling in Afanadar: Prologue

    As others have said before me, great description, but there's too much of it. Don't get me wrong, you have no problem with wonderful descriptions, I could see this in ...

    Aug 17, 2007
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Elder's Secret (Removed)

    The descriptions and character development is wonderful, not to mention your brilliant plot set up. I have one thing that wasn't too clear, why was Colin's mother so mean? Was ...

    Aug 6, 2007
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Keys To The Kingdom

    I'm looking for Lady Friday and it's driving me nuts. I have to find out what happens to Arthur, of course then I'll have to wait for Superior Saturday (Book ...

    Aug 5, 2007
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: His Dark Materials.

    I saw the movie previews for The Golden Compass and knew that I had to read these books. I've been looking for copies and am about to go to a ...

    Aug 5, 2007


I like to create sympathy for my characters, then set the monsters loose.
— Stephen King