PenguinAttack

Thankyou sooo much everyone, for the fabulous crits. Obviously I did a little work on it in there, and forgot to comment at the same time... hopefully this is a ...

Thank you Stella, Amelia, I should get back to editing this as well (I have been ever so remiss in all my editing) some time in the near future. Thanks ...

Hehe, thanks Sugar, Ygaron. I appreciate your taking the time to read this, and even more so the fact that you took the time to comment. Much thanks, once again. ...

I really should remember to come back and try and finish this. Thanks to you both, Rea and Derek. I understand what you mean about the deeds... it may be ...

Thank you all for such lovely comments, I appreciate each and every one of them. Sometimes the personal - whether you liked it or not - comments are the best ...

Hrrmm... okay. I still like this, but now I think you're over-using "pull" throughtout the poem. Reading over it again, and the comments after my own... I think Cade has ...

Eheh, Nate you make me giggle so much. That said, thankyouthankyouthankyou. That is one awesome crit. I'm not one for punctuation, obviously, so that helped a *lot* as I often ...

Thanks so much Starry! You're a legend and a half for such a nice crit. I have altered the "flips" and I hope this works better, it's in keeping with ...

Thank you all for your lovely comments, I'm very glad you like it. ^.^ This *is* a poem... Not all poems need to rhyme, of course. ^.^ Just so you ...

Thank you all for commenting. I fixed up that bit of repetition, though I'm not sure I like what I cahnged it to (hehe) thanks for that. I understand the ...

thank you all for taking the time to read this. And your comments are very much appreciated. Sadly I have alsways had a bit of a problem with tenses, and ...

Thankyou both LizzyG and Audy for commenting. It is most appreciated. I fixed that spelling error, thankyou grandly - I'm not a speller, in the least. I am curious as ...

Thanks for taking the time to read the poem. ^^ I have altered the line, your suggestion being more than suitable. In the end I do think the alteration fits ...

Thankyou most kindly, dear critters ^.^ All of your comments are most appreciated. I *think* I fixed the punctuation, putting it in a paragraph like that was most helpful indeed! ...

Thanks sugarpops! Your comments are so very appreciated. I've fixed up the issues and I thankyou for pointing them out. I especially hate when I have spelling or grammar issues, ...