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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Smile

    That was a very good poem, and I can really tell you put a lot of work into it. I really liked the theme of the poem, to live life ...

    Jul 27, 2012
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: "Concrete Jungle"

    Thank you so much! I really appreciate it. And also, SpeedyPencil, I love your avatar, and happy birthday 567ajt!

    Jul 27, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: "Pandora's Box"

    Thank you! While the repitition of "Hope is there" was intentional, I agree that it could have been done better. I also agree that it could have been longer and ...

    Jul 27, 2012


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