PenNPaper

Good story, keep it up, although I couldnt understand two things. 'I feel for Mr Kyoski', do you feel bad or sad? You said that girls classify Aaron as 'Perfect', ...

It's a good story, it kept me in suspense till the very end, i was glad you didn't reveal her power, it would have made the story less interesting. To ...

That was nice! At first I thought that the guy JuJu was going to take you to someplace nice or something. And then suddenly it turns out to be a ...

The story was great. Personally, I don't like to read Cinderella, but after i read your story, it seemed like you had turned it into an interesting read. Just one ...