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That's fine! Anytime you can would be welcome!;)

Thanks for the review! I'm trying to get Anna to focus more on one or two characters from her team, like I'm doing with mine, so she'll hopefully do better ...

Aahhh! Same as the last part! This is too perfect for me to review! I want more!! ;)

Well, Noelle, I feel the same way as Deanie! This is just too amazing for me to say anything that's wrong. One question though... It seems like Rhys got really ...

Thanks for the review! I've actually been thinking about a prologue. As far character development, when I say I'll get to it it means when I come back and edit ...

Thanks! This is the second half of Chapter One. (Which means Anna still wrote it). About the physical thing, more of that comes throughout the story. It's kind of the ...

Haha, it's all right, I've done the same thing. For now, we're done with editing, but when we finish the book, we'll do a lot more. :)

Hi Abi! Ok, I've never heard of the phrase "experience not watch". To be honest, I'm not really sure what you mean by that. For one, I didnt write this ...

Thanks for all your reviews! As I've said to other people that have reviewed this, for right now, I'm done with these chapters. But I will keep your advice in ...

I'm really hoping they do to! The hovercraft is the "lift" they get into at the end of chapter one. Right now, things are a bit confusing and slightly disorganized ...

Thanks again. I didn't write this chapter, and I do agree with you in some points. (I'm co-writing this)

Thanks!

Thanks for the review! Although I'm pretty much done with this chapter, I'll keep this in mind for when I comeback and do a final edit! You. Have read the ...

No problem!

Yeah, that makes sense.