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Wow, this was really good! I couldn't stop reading, I just wanted to see what horrible thing Miranda did next! your MC is pretty good and believeable, but Miranda is ...

They meet in a small, sunny café above the metro station. The city moving about them. it should be a comma, the second sentence sounds awkward alone. the one , ...

Well, i'm sorry about whatever happened with your friend, but a great poem came out of it!! I didn't see any grammar problems yay! I loved it! It had a ...

Hi! I read Maximum Ride a few years ago, they were pretty good. I think you kind of missed her sarcasm in places, although it's hard to put sarcasm and ...

It was great and rich in deatil. Your writing is very flowing and easy to keep reading. Once I started, I didn't stop. But also, it was missing a focused ...

I agree with Tamara, it was a little hard to read because of the long line's and no spacing, but it was great, regardless of what it looked like :) ...

hi! this is my first review, sorry if it's horrible! :) Great descriptions at the beginning, but I have a few comments. Falling leaves were scattered all over the muddy ...