Paulnitro14

I have one question at the moment. Does this have to do with something that happened to you once? This whole story is so sentimental that i feel like someone ...

Honestly I think you should add more too the story. It just doesn't feel right to end the story the that you did. The sentences flowed perfectly, the story made ...

At first i thought this story was going to be about a school bully picking on people. But it turned into a most tasteful story that i liked very much. ...

The last paragraph is pretty funny but sooooo true about toddlers. I also found that this story found a way to my heart. What I personally found that made me ...