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  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: A Promise We Kept/Dancing

    Aaaahh I see, anyways, amazing work

    Jul 20, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I Plowed // the Clouds.

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    This makes me think of elm trees and it's brevity feels very appropriate, short and spinning and changing direction like the seed pods it brings to mind The use of ...

    Jul 20, 2015
  • Other » Other, Lyrical Re: Chances

    Never mind, I figured out how to edit it

    Jul 20, 2015
  • Other » Other, Lyrical Re: Chances

    Thank you, I appreciate your concern and advice, I'm not particularly religious, but I'm glad for your suggestion and I'm happy that you enjoyed my work. Having this person in ...

    Jul 20, 2015
  • Other » Other, Lyrical Re: Chances

    Thank you for the suggestion on the paragraph separation, I didn't think of that when I sent it to her, but she really liked it, is there a way to ...

    Jul 20, 2015


Poetry is my cheap means of transportation. By the end of the poem the reader should be in a different place from where he started. I would like him to be slightly disoriented at the end, like I drove him outside of town at night and dropped him off in a cornfield.
— Billy Collins