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  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Man in the U-bahn

    Thabk you so much. it means a lot to me to hear that :)

    Jan 6, 2022
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: Woman in Baerenschanze

    Thanks a lot! I am trying to get inspired!

    Feb 8, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: Farewell in Jaegerstrasse

    Hi Burnblazex, thanks a lot for taking time to read my microstory and for your valuable comments! see you around!

    Feb 3, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: Woman in Baerenschanze

    Hi frogforest, thank you so much for your kind words. Tt means a lot to me! see you around :)

    Feb 3, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: Woman in Baerenschanze

    Hi Lil, thanks for reading my work. Yes, I saw this woman at the metro station once!

    Feb 3, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: Woman in Baerenschanze

    Hi Lunagirl, thank you so much for your valuable comments and suggestions. I will certainly take them into account. Regarding "small steps, vertical", what I want to convey to the ...

    Feb 3, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: Woman in Baerenschanze

    Hi Wolfe, thank you so much for spending time reviewing my work. I really appreciate it...Actually, I am still trying to understand what is the message I want to convey ...

    Feb 3, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: Farewell in Jaegerstrasse

    Thank you LUNAGIRL! :)

    Feb 2, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: Farewell in Jaegerstrasse

    Hi Harry, thank you for writing my text..I am happy to read that you could actually imagine those two thanks to my is really short indeed but I am still ...

    Feb 2, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Another S***** Day

    I like the honesty of this piece. Thank you for sharing it with us. The message is very effective, as it feels depressing and sad. It does feel like a ...

    Feb 2, 2021
  • Short Story » Humor, Other Re: Science is Quite Poetic

    This is a surprising piece! Thanks for sharing! I like the repetition and the structure you created with it. The way you finished it makes me laugh. It is scientific ...

    Feb 2, 2021


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