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Re: Pull the trigger
Okay not sure if this will fit in with your poem, but where you say side and hides, it sounds odd. What about, "I put my hand to one of ...
Oct 20, 2006 -
Re: my girls mad at me
I don't mean to be discouraging especially when your new to the site... but honestly, what was this? I was reminded of some overdone [cheesy] musical. Also, rhyming. You don't ...
Oct 19, 2006 -
Re: Opium Visions
Like it, loved it, fantastic
Oct 16, 2006 -
Re: Began the Going Under
I like it please write more
Oct 12, 2006