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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Wild Ones Ch.1 & 2

    Hey! I saw that you needed reviews here so I came over right away to help you out! Let's begin. First of all, I really like your first chapter. It ...

    Thu Aug 19, 2010 12:54 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: A Taint Of Red Chapt. 1 (Draft 2)

    Hi there! I saw that you only had one review so I thought I would come pop on by and give you a review! (Well, for that reason and I ...

    Wed Aug 18, 2010 9:40 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: How difficult life could be - Chapter 2

    Hello, hello! Here I am to review the second chapter! :) Since there aren't that many grammatical errors pointed out already by your other reviewers, I'll do my best to ...

    Wed Aug 18, 2010 8:01 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: How difficult life could be - Chapter 1

    Hey there! I reviewed your poem because the link led to that, but then I realized that you must have put the link to the wrong piece since it was ...

    Wed Aug 18, 2010 6:44 pm
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I choose to throw the dice once again...

    Hi there! I just saw your post on my review page and I thought I may as well head over here right away and heed to your request! However, I ...

    Mon Aug 16, 2010 6:24 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: (Unnamed) chapter two

    Hey! I'm so so so sorry that this took so long! I really don't have any excuse, but I really am sorry about making you wait this long. I see ...

    Mon Dec 28, 2009 12:18 am
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: My Experience in the House *Updated x2*

    Hey again, I'm here, finally! Again, I'm so sorry that this took so long, but I hope that this review will be helpful. Description This was the biggest problem in ...

    Thu Dec 03, 2009 1:14 am
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Taking Over.

    Hey! I'm so so sorry for not getting this review to you for so long, but November was just a hectic month for me. But since you've waited for so ...

    Thu Dec 03, 2009 12:53 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Waver: [1]

    Hey Pink! I am so so sorry it took so long for me to finally review, but here I am. I hope that this helps, so here we go! Nit-Picks ...

    Thu Dec 03, 2009 12:40 am
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Strange Love III-The butterfly effect

    Hey there! I'm finally here, and incredibly sorry that this took so long. I won't even try to make excuses. But just know that I am incredibly sorry and I ...

    Mon Nov 09, 2009 6:01 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: You're It (Chapter 2) *rewritten/edited*

    Hey there! I'm so incredibly sorry that this took so long but I was just hugely busy until now. So here I am, and here we go! I'll try not ...

    Mon Nov 09, 2009 4:08 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Bye for now. Part II

    Hey Pudin! I'm so so sorry that it took so long for me to give you your review, but finally I'm here. But anyways, let's get to the review that ...

    Mon Nov 09, 2009 3:44 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Vampires Story Prolouge

    Hey there! I'm Trish, and I'll be reviewing your story today! I'm trying to cut back on the nit-picks a bit, so there probably won't be very many. I'll mostly ...

    Tue Oct 27, 2009 3:10 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: Suite Life of Z&C --- Dark Intentions - Chapter 3

    Hey again! As I said before, I'm very sorry that this is so late, but finally here I am to review! So let's get going! Nit-Picks There was just another ...

    Mon Oct 26, 2009 11:54 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Bye for Now. Part I

    Hey! I got your request, so here I am to review! (Just beware of the nit-picks! :lol:) But let's get started, shall we? Nit-Picks Life, what is life but a ...

    Mon Oct 26, 2009 3:50 am


Life is the art of drawing sufficient conclusions from insufficient premises.
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