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Re: Chapter one: The Interrogation
Hi there! It's great you've developed a pretty complex and and interesting idea for just the first chapter. You really seam to be going somewhere and you know what's going ...
Jun 24, 2014 -
Re: Removed at the author's request
Hi there! As a reader the overall feel was well developed. That bitter, angry, and vengeful tone is used pretty consistently and it effectively expresses that type of rebellious attitude ...
Jun 23, 2014 -
Re: Asenath:Tears on the Sand Chapter 1
Hi there! I'm new on YWS and thought I'd do a quick review. I really like this piece. It is appealing to the senses And not too hard to follow. ...
Jun 22, 2014