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Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 1
Good luck with the National Review Month contest thing! Thanks again for all your help and kind comments!
Sep 4, 2015 -
Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 1
Thank you so much! I will make sure to fix the grammar errors! I tried to put the letter in italics and failed, but I will try again! Josh goes ...
Sep 4, 2015 -
Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 1
Thank you so much! I can agree with Josh being your average old character, but I'm trying to work on making him stand out a bit more. I'll definitely keep ...
Sep 4, 2015 -
Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 1
Thank you for the advice! I actually wrote the first draft about a year ago, and now I'm going through editing and fixing plot bunnies. But the advice is still ...
Sep 4, 2015 -
Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 1
Thank you so, so much! I'll try and fix around the Info dumps, and definitely keep the "show don't tell" in mind! As for the tenses, I apologize. They are ...
Sep 3, 2015 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 2 *
This was awesome! It totally wasn't what I was expecting! :)
Sep 2, 2015 -
Re: Bring The Rain-Chapter 4
Great chapter!! Can't wait for more!
Aug 31, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 2: We are in Very Big Trouble
Thanks! I'll keep that in mind when Review Day starts! :D
Aug 29, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 8-- Lone Voice Radio: Part I
No problem! I'm glad I could help! And thank you for clearing that up for me, :D
Aug 29, 2015 -
Re: Paper Planes (Ch1)
No problem! I'm glad I could help! :)
Aug 28, 2015