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Thank you guy's for reading it, I really appreciate it. I will fix it up, and I will take all your advise into condiseration when I do. Thanks!!!

That's okay, I need all the help I can get with this. And I am not telling the story in Missy's point of view anymore. Thanks for commenting!

I found this really good. It had lots of depth to it and i found it was written very well. I can relate to it, so it did have some ...

Hey guys, thanks for the great reviews! I know though isn't a very good copy, but I'll be sure to fix it up soon. And I will do some reviews, ...

Thanks!!

I like this one! I also didn't read all of it (sorry), but I did read most of it and it sounds really good. You written it very well! Can't ...

Thanks guys for the reviews!!!!! I'll be sure to fix the mistakes!!!! - Ellie