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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: a moment of realisation, edit

    This is really intriguing :) I love the description of the vial and the opening sentences. Can't wait to read more. I agree with what someone said above about the ...

    Jul 1, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Golden Rose

    You've created some strong images and a charged atmosphere that really catches the attention of the reader :) Now onto some helpful critique: Rain pounded the trees, somehow it slipped ...

    Jul 1, 2010


I'll admit the two turtle doves are growing on me, but there are ten birds in this house already and we both know geese are feathered bioweapons of mass destruction.
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