PaperMoon

I agree with karibbean, the title doesn't seem to fit your poem. The first stanza, with "the distance:a mile" (I don't really know how to quote yet...) was really good. ...

I think that when you, or rather your speaker says (and I don't quite know how to quote so I'll make due): "Do they talk, to the pebbles, on their ...

Hey, I'm relatively new to this entire process, so you'll have to forgive me for my mistakes. I enjoyed your poem a lot, the imagery you conjured fit beautifully with ...