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White Ice
I was always a dreamerI dreamt of a home that smelt of breadOf sleep at night and moonlit skiesOf sleep and wake and cold morning grassI wasn't born to stand ...
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A fishing ghost
This is really just the beginning of something, please could I have some critique, or even some ideas of how it could develop? Anything you feel is relevant.The first time ...
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Opportunities
This is not a complete story, it is part of a longer story, but I still would really like any critique or comments as I am not sure what I ...
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Resignation
This is not a complete story, it's just another little bit, I'd like some suggestions and help re the dialogue, or bascially any critique anyone wants to give me is ...
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The Ghost's Advice
Another little bit from the story I'm writing. The protagonist is able to see ghosts and have relationships with them and is determined to find the reason why. The character ...
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Returned to Sender
Some more of the story I'm writing... this fits itself in right after my piece called "Resignation". The two halves of this are supposed to be in the same chapter, ...