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Glad it helped! :D

Thank you. I will add some descriptors to make the children's identities clearer.

Thank you. Can you point out any parts of the prose that seemed awkward to you? I do read my work aloud. (Also, the children mentioned at the beginning are ...

Thank you very much! 'To loose' is actually a verb that means to release something. And Hester's feet were unsteady due to her having been hit in one leg, but ...

Thank you very much! This is really useful. :D

Thank you!

Thank you for the review. I don't think I would do away with the rhyme scheme, only because part of the parody is that it's an insulting sonnet. But I'll ...

Thank you! Yes, I can see Sam might seem oddly at ease, but you're right in assuming that he's been possessed for some time. There's a lot more to the ...

My goodness, thank you! I'm glad that it wasn't too confusing to read, as it's only a snapshot of a whole back story I have for these characters. Thank you ...

Ah, I see. Thanks for pointing it out! And I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

Thank you! What was the grammatical error, could I ask? It's just that I submitted this as coursework for uni so I've honestly proofread it to death

Oh man, thank you!! And thanks for the follow! :D

Thank you! That's really lovely of you to say. I do intend to come back to this at some point. :)

Thank you!

Thanks for the review! I'm considering writing something more substantial about these characters at some point in the future, maybe focused on their past. It may not be for a ...