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I thought I owed it to you to be fast after such a long wait! Looking forward to the next one. :)

I don't know what you're talking about. Edna seeing Hamilton is peak drama and I'm 100% here for it

Thank you! :)

You're welcome! I do love that Mrs Bale is supportive, but I think it's great that you're showing she's human too. That's even less common in YA novels, I think. ...

Thank you so much! This is really helpful. I am a little concerned about Esther's passivity even though it is mostly intetional. I hope I can resolve it in the ...

Thank you! :D

You're welcome!

It didn't, no. I'm eager for more action soon but it certainly didn't bother me in this chapter - it feels like you're setting us up for action. :)

Thank you! :)

That's a really cool idea!

I don't have time to review this quite yet but WOW I LOVE THIS

Thanks! :)

Thanks for the review! Oddly enough, the Christopher Lloyd reference came to mind without me immediately realising the glaring time-travel connection, but I can completely see your point. Thank you! ...

Thank you! Yes, you pretty much got it bang on - the old woman is the future version of Marsha, though she only knew about the keys because she remembers ...

Ahh I see! Well, I hope it helps him :)