Panikos

Hi, mellifera! I thought I might as well review the next bit, even though I probably shouldn't be giving myself so many spoilers. Small Comments “Then you’re not allowed to ...

Hi, mellifera! Happy Review Day! I'm not mega-familiar with this story, though I have reviewed a chapter or two before, but I'll try my best to make this critique useful ...

Hi Bisc! And a happy Review Day to you! Small Comments She’d watched from the kitchen window as her two children Ah, I didn't actually twig until this moment that ...

Back again! Small Comments “Yeah,” Josie agreed, “Siblings.” Her friend Annie, who worked at the station next to her in the munitions factory I'll just say, it feels like bit ...

Hi, Bisc! Finally got round to reviewing this! Specific Comments "Oh, Josie, you know there's no such thing as fairies." Eric thought of them as famous last words these days, ...

Hi, Lightsong! Just dropping in for another review. Small Comments ‘I don’t know, Gael. What’s your plan?’ Veris said, slowly reaching the wooden stick. Gael and he weren’t good in ...

Hi, Mage! I think you're being too hard on yourself where this chapter is concerned. Despite your warnings, I really enjoyed it! Small Comments She reread the first entry. Then ...

Hi Mage! Back again to review. I don't really have any small comments for this chapter, just general stuff, so I'm not going to follow my usual format. Before I ...

Hey Mage! Sorry it's taken such a long time for me to review this! I read it almost immediately after you posted it and it's one of my favourite chapters ...

Hey, Tuck! Dropping in to review again. Sorry for being so incredibly slow with these! Small Comments "Are you ready?" he mouthed to her, and she nodded quickly. Her hands ...

Hiya Mage! Back again to review. Small Comments She should have thought of calling Aspen sooner this morning. She had let herself get distracted by her dream and conversation with ...

Hey, Mage! So glad to see you managed to publish this. As much as I might gripe and nitpick, I really am invested in this story and I always look ...

Hi, Lightsong! It's been too long. Sorry it's taken a while for me to get to this - I'm so ridiculously busy at the minute. I also apologise for any ...

Hi Tuck! Back again! First, just a comment about your author's note: Previously, Skylar, Issac, Darien, and Kiersten infiltrated a government building with the goal of seizing some important files. ...

Hey, MJ! Just thought I'd drop in and review this! Is this a revamp of Blue Powder? I'm intrigued. I will preface this review by saying I'm not totally won ...