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  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Too Much Blank Space, Not Enough Vomit - Ch. 7.2

    Hiya, LordStar! Another quick one. This was a good chapter. Switching the POV to Ethan gives us a nice change of pace, especially given that Ethan's goals are a lot ...

    Jul 30, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Too Much Blank Space, Not Enough Vomit - Ch. 7.1

    Hiya, LordStar! Back again. This will be a quick one. This is kind of a chapter of two halves for me. The second half feels significantly stronger than the first, ...

    Jul 30, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Teen Fiction Re: Too Much Blank Space, Not Enough Vomit - Ch. 6

    Hiya, LordStar. Just popping in for another quick review. Small nitpicks: Today, however, a rainy Thursday, he let himself into Rhys' room, his silhouette a soft outline in the blue, ...

    Jul 29, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Teen Fiction Re: Too Much Blank Space, Not Enough Vomit - Ch. 5.2

    Heyo, thought I'd drop by for a quick critique! As I've only read odd bits of this story, I can't comment much on the general trajectory of the plot, but ...

    Jul 28, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Supernatural Re: HWYD Chapter 3.2

    Hiya again, Q! I've not got too much to say about this chapter. Mia continues to be sweet and adorable, Finnley continues to be distant, and you play their personalities ...

    Jul 5, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Supernatural Re: HWYD Chapter 3.1

    Heya, Q! It's been so long since I read any of this, but I had a look over the previous chapter and I think I can roughly remember everything that's ...

    Jul 5, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Chasing Shadows - Chapter 3 (Part 2)

    Hiya Payne! Back to review again. This chapter felt a little bit uneven in some ways, but I enjoyed it more than the previous segment. There seemed to be a ...

    Jun 24, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Chasing Shadows - Chapter 3 (Part 1)

    Hiya, Payne! Just dropping in for a quick review. I've not read any of the other chapters, unfortunately, but I'll still try to make this as helpful as I can. ...

    Jun 21, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 10

    Hiya, shieldmaiden! Pan here for a quick review. I've not read any other chapters of this, so apologies in advance if I miss details, but I thought it was about ...

    Jun 19, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Too Much Blank Space, Not Enough Vomit - Ch. 3

    Hiya, thought I'd drop in and review the next chapter, seeing as it's been kicking around in the Green Room for some time. I think this carries on in the ...

    Jun 10, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Too Much Blank Space, Not Enough Vomit - Ch. 2.3

    Hi, LordStar. Thought I'd swing by for a review. I think I read the first chapter of this, but I don't know a great deal about the plot, so apologies ...

    Jun 8, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Wis-per (Chapter 9)

    Hi, Anma! Just dropping in for a quick review. I haven't read any of the previous chapters of this, so apologies if I miss details, but I thought it was ...

    Jun 7, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Beginning Regrets - The Creature Inside Chapter 4

    Hi, bigsisfarmer! Just dropping in for a quick review. Unfortunately, I've not read the other chapters of this and my knowledge of Batman is faaairly limited, but I'm still going ...

    Jun 5, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Chapter One of Book #2

    Hi, zwilliams! I'm Pan, here to fry up a quick review for you. So, this is a cool concept. I like the combination of angels with a classic sci-fi premise- ...

    Jun 3, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: (The Ringly's ch. 4)

    Hi, TheMulticoloredCyr! I haven't read any other chapters of this, but I still thought I'd swing by for a quick review. Starting with the positives, this piece has a lot ...

    Jun 2, 2019


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