Panikos

Hiya, Zrillis! Just dropping in for a quick review. I've not read any of the previous chapters in this story, so apologies if I don't understand everything, but I'll try ...

Hiya, Anamel! I've not read the other chapters of this, but I thought I'd drop in with a quick review even so. I'm going to keep this critique short and ...

Hiya, Moalex! Just dropping in for a quick critique. I've not read the earlier chapters of this, but I'll try and make this review as helpful as I can. I'll ...

Hiya, MoonlightForest! Just dropping in for a quick review. I'm going to start with the criticisms just to get them out of the way. I think these chapters get stronger ...

Hi, bodacious_baekon! I thought I'd drop in with a review for you, but first, something to note: It's never really a good idea to post such a huge piece of ...

Hiya, Miraculor77! I'm afraid I've not read any of the previous chapters from this, but seeing as my RevMo goal is to review solely Green Room works, I thought I'd ...

Hiya, DottieSnark! Dropping in for a quick review. I've never watched any Buffy, but I thought I'd swing by and try and help shift this from the Green Room. I'll ...

Hiya, Elinor! I'm going to kick off my RevMo journey by helping you kick this out of the Green Room. I've not read the other chapters, but having read some ...

Hiya again, LordStar. I can't believe I'm up to date! I really liked this chapter overall. The scene with Leah and Rhys is cute and fun, but it still has ...

Hiya, LordStar. Nitpicks: "You're not old enough to drink," Ethan scolded, his older brother instincts coming out as he was reminded of Rhys . The bold feels a bit expository. ...

Hiya again, LordStar. First, a nitpick: all it held was a trucker at the counter, a few seats away from Lip, and a Hispanic family sitting in a booth in ...

Hiya, LordStar. Bisc has kind of already nailed most of the points I wanted to make, so I'll keep this fairly brief. One of the first things I want to ...

Hiya, Oli! Another quick review. There's definitely a disconnect between this scene compared to the first half of the chapter. They don't feel connected at all, and you don't give ...

Hiya Oli. Dropping in for a quick one. Guess I was wrong about the knock at the door being something significant! I feel a little bit cheated with that. I ...

Hiya, LordStar! Back again. This was a nice chapter and it leaves me with a big sense of foreboding. It was good to see a softer conversation between Ethan and ...