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Re: Scott Wood/LightBringer chapter 1: Winter this way comes
Hiya, Boluk! I noticed that this has been kicking around in the Green Room for quite some time, so I thought I'd pop in and give you a quick review. ...
Feb 19, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 28.1
Hiya, BlueAfrica. Pan dropping in for another review. Small Comments Up by the ceiling, Beatrice circled a light fixture angrily, as if to say that their carpet wasn’t entirely ruined, ...
Feb 18, 2018 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 17.1
Hiya, Querencia. Pan dropping in for what'll have to be a super quick critique because I've got to get to bed in like twenty minutes. Finnley skimmed the message and ...
Feb 14, 2018 -
Re: The Watchtower
Hi, Elinor! I saw you'd posted this on your wall, so I thought I'd check it out and whip up a review for you. The prose is pretty polished in ...
Feb 14, 2018 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 16.2
Hi, Querencia. Dropping in yet again. "Monica," Finnley said after several minutes had passed As I mentioned in a previous review, people don't just stand in silence for whole minutes. ...
Feb 13, 2018 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 16.1
Hiiiya, Querencia. I'm back again. I'm shooting to get up to date with this novel by the end of the month. Realistically, that probably won't happen, but I'm going to ...
Feb 13, 2018 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 15.3
Hiya, Querencia. Can't get rid of me. Finnley still wasn't entirely sure what to think about Sylvie, but he needed to focus right now. He was going to work, which ...
Feb 12, 2018 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 15.2
Hiya, Querencia. Pan dropping in yet again. Despite being seemingly breezy, he could tell that the weekend events weighed heavily upon her. And why shouldn't they? Her house was half ...
Feb 12, 2018 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 15.1
Hiya, Querencia. Back again. Finnley typed his blog post in the dull light colored blue from his still-drawn curtains. I found this sentence a bit weird. It led me up ...
Feb 11, 2018 -
Re: The Pink War Chapter 1
Hi, izanami! I'd shorten your name to Iza, but that's actually the name of a character of mine - who, coincidentally, is a demon. But let's not get into that. ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 14.2
Hiya, Querencia! Pan back again to review. "The heart of it is, we went to find Mia's uncle tonight because there are monsters in the woods." Mrs. Bale scoffed. "Finnley, ...
Feb 8, 2018 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 14.1
Hiya, Querencia. You know the drill by now. Then he was alone, save for the firefighters who were working to control the blaze, spraying arcs of water that seemed to ...
Feb 6, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 15.1: Gael
Hiya, Lightsong. Pan dropping in to review. From now on, I'm going to be in a perpetual state of anxiety as far as this story goes, what with all your ...
Feb 6, 2018 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 13.3
Hiya, Querencia! Pan back again. There was just the ghost of a smile on her face, and she gently pushed his hands away. "I know what I'm doing," she replied ...
Feb 5, 2018 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 13.2
Hi, Querencia. Dropping in again. "There's the road!" Monica cried, pointing dead ahead. There was a significant height difference between the dirt road and the highway, and everyone except Fred ...
Feb 4, 2018
