Panikos

Hiya, Mea! I'm back again. I've not got too many small comments for this one, but I do have plenty to say about the overall chapter. Let's go. Small Comments ...

Hi, Mea! Sorry for the delay again. Between holidays and LMS and seeing friends and family, it's quite difficult to squeeze reviews in. Small Comments “How do you even know ...

Hello again, Blue. I'm actually caught up? At last? We'll see how long I can actually stay on top of it this time. Small Comments The rain soaked into his ...

Hiya, Blue! I'm back and hungry for a n g s t. Small Comments "She won't take him by surprise , he knows she's coming." Change the comma to a ...

Hiya, Blue. Back again. Small Comments Kiernan had been out in front but darted over to Benjamin's side . [...] "Um, excuse me," Clem shouted over the rain. "The rest ...

Hiya, Lightsong! Glad to see a new chapter at last! As usual, I'll start with the small stuff and then give my overall thoughts. Small grammar/spelling corrections will be shown ...

Hiya, Blue. Back again. Small Comments "Not much, then." She was paler than normal but flicked her hair out of her face impatiently Because the chapter is oriented from Clem's ...

Hiya, Blue! Sorry it's been so long but I am, in fact, a literal can of garbage, so allow me to try and redeem myself by catching up. Small Comments ...

Hiya, Bisc. I've got an absolute mountain of reviews to plough through, and what better place to start than with yours. I read this quite a while back but so ...

Hi, Mea! Back again to review, still at my usual snail pace. This chapter was worth my wait, so I hope the review is worth yours. Small Comments He checked ...

Hiya, Mea. It's your favourite snail reviewer who meant to catch up with this story on Review Day but was too busy moping around with a hangover, so here I ...

Hiya, Pompadour! Sorry I've been such a snail in getting to this. I'm trying to review all of the LMS novels I'm following before I allow myself to continue mine, ...

Hiya, Blue! I thought I'd go ahead and catch up with this before the rest of the LMS chapters come flooding in. Small Comments At last he unhooked the sword ...

Hiya, Blue! I always want more of this story, but you're going to ruin me with these speedy updates. I am a reviewing snail and I cannot - type - ...

Hey, Biscuits! Don't mind me as I scramble to keep on top of reviews before the next blast wave hits. Though I'm sure my struggle pales in comparison to yours ...