Panikos

Hiya, Dest! Just dropping in for a quick review. There was something really charming about this piece. I'm going to touch quite a lot of criticisms later in the review, ...

Hiii, Lightsong! Pan dropping in for a quick review, with my usual formula. Great to see a new chapter so soon. Small Comments Ilami opened her eyes and gasped. It ...

Heya Blue, it's ya gal Pan dropping in for her 36th review of #revmo and some fresh Kiernan (or should I say Kokebe?) Content™. This is probably the best chapter ...

Hiya, lokislove! Just dropping in for a quick review. As this piece is so short, I'm just going to comment on bits of it as I read and tell you ...

Hi, Sae! I'm finally up-to-date. It's quite sad that I'll have to wait a week for each instalment now, but I do hope you keep going with this story for ...

Hey, Saen! Small Comments “Guards-” “They're not from Telorum,” Lira hurriedly cut him off . Taking a protective step in front of both Aspen and Cass, Lira looked back [as] ...

Hi again, Sae! I'm catching up steadily. I'm going to be sad when I have to wait for this weekly like everyone else! Small Comments Lira brought them through the ...

Hiya, Saen! Small Comments Aspen quickly hobbled after Lira and Rodet, but Cass lingered behind their two guides . Unnecessary. Even if you decide to keep it, I'd swap 'their ...

Hiya, Saen! Back again for another round of reviews. :) Small Comments It was only as the voices started to grow clearer that Cass noticed how quiet their pace had ...

Hey, Saen! You're probably sick of the sight of me by now, but I'm nothing if not persistent. :) Small Comments And then she gasped, because they were standing in ...

Hiya, GodHatesShane! Pan dropping in for a quick review. As this is such a short piece, I'm just going to work through it and comment as I go. I looked ...

Hiya, Sae! Here I am again~ Small Comments Their moods had been dampened by the conversations regarding both the locket and the dreams , and Cass couldn't help but feel ...

Hiya, Sae! I'm going to blitz through as many chapters of this as I can today because (a) I just want to keep reading and (b) revmo calls. Small Comments ...

Hiya, Saen! Back again. Small Comments An hour later, the old jeep was pulling into the flea market. I don't see why you need the progressive aspect here. Just 'pulled ...

Hiya, Saen! Here I am again. Same drill as last time. Small Comments The warm sunlight danced across Cass' bare skin as the crisp morning air blew in through the ...