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Re: Wings
Oh my god. I'm in love with the last line...you know: "I caught some on my tongue like snowflakes; by the time they’d melted, I was in love." That was ...
Dec 5, 2008 -
Re: As if I was in Love Chp 3 (edited)
I'm confused...didn't Aaron have brown hair and blue eyes, not blond hair and blue eyes? Haha, other then that good story!!! Everyone else helped with the grammer issues so i ...
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: Already Won Me
Hey! Okay so i like where you are going with this, but even though im fifteen, i am still out of the loop. Does 'win her' mean...*ehem*???? Haha. Just wondering. ...
Dec 2, 2008 -
Re: Afraid to Die
I think this is a good story! You really, are keeping it a mystery. One thing is i dont know if this is a boy or girl...that kind of confused ...
Dec 2, 2008 -
Re: Midnight to Dawn-Prologue
I thought it was good :) I enjoyed reading it...and since it seems like everyone posted most of the nit picky mistakes I really have anything to say except... GOOD ...
Nov 30, 2008 -
Re: Introduction
Okay, good story. I liked it a lot. I especially liked how it was a dream :) Some editing:: --Looking back over my shoulder I frowned, and head back up ...
Nov 30, 2008 -
Re: Rain
I like this story a lot. I think maybe you should add a little bit more history to the pain she caused doing the rain. Possible even more detail to ...
Nov 30, 2008 -
Re: Walking in the dark
I read the link and i think i would have been able to follow even if i hadn't read it! I think you should keep "Carmen" a mystery, maybe to ...
Nov 30, 2008