Panda326

Hey there! I thought this was VERY nicely written. My favorite lines had to be, The twitch in his eyelid, an imperfection in the iris. A crack in the ceiling ...

Hello there, I like how at the bottom you added that whole thing explaing the poem. Thank you for that, because for one it made me laugh, and it took ...

Hello there, this was really nice! I enjoyed the fact that it was a.... responsive poem? Haha, but the colors were a bit bright and it made it a tad ...

Hello there. This was written very well! I quite enjoyed reading it =) Looking at what the others put I don't really have anything to say haha =/ But just ...

Hey! I really like this poem! I agree with the others, it is nice and simple, but has a very good meaning behind it =). Very well done! Nothin bad ...