PaintMaster

Thanks for the review. I'll keep this in mind. Usually the stories I write are better, but I believe I was lazy the day I wrote this. xD

This is deep. At least for me it is. I bet many people can relate to this. I love how it's written, with description in the right places.

I love the beginning. It was very easy to read. After the eighth line it got really hard to read in a steady flow. But still, my new favorite poem.

Thanks, really appreciate it.