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Paige

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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Collision

    Wow this was... breathtaking. It was so short, but so beautiful! I've got tears in my eyes, literally. I don't cry often, and never for writing, but this - oh ...

    Jun 27, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Silence is Betrayal

    This poem is really touching! I feel like the way you've written it, how anyone can relate to it, at one time or another in their life. As another reviewer ...

    Jun 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: To The One I Love(d) | Edited

    This is truly, very good! I love writing poems/lyrics myself, and this is definitely a poem/lyrical to be proud of. I like how you stayed with the theme of the ...

    Jun 27, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Twisted: Chapter2

    This is really great! I'm a huge fan. Also, I've noticed the grammar has SUPREMELY improved from Chapter One. Not that it was that bad from the beginning, but here ...

    Jun 27, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Love is Only the Beginning: Chapter One

    Wow. Wow. Wow! I'm totally hooked. Your grammar was close to perfect, if not perfect. I may have noticed one or two errors, but compared to other works I've seen, ...

    Jun 26, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Historical Fiction Re: Flawed and Imperfect - Chapter 1

    Hello! I'd like to start out by saying, I really enjoyed the story, and I will read more. I partially agree with the past reviewers, on the statement that there ...

    Jun 26, 2013


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